Monday, March 14, 2011

Beating Pain.....

Oh pain! Oh pain! There's something you should know,
Halt now, surrender, and listen to what I say,
Every time you hurt, I only thrive and grow,
Oh pain, you'll see, you will not have your way.
Oh pain you knock so loudly on my door,
Armed with grief and loaded with tons of sorrow,
Oh pain I'll win, I'm ready for this war,
I won't give up I'll see a better tomorrow.
I know your goal is to destroy but wait,
If more pain then courage and hope does soar,
My spirit rises a song I do create,
I told you I will surely win this war.
Do you see what I mean now Mr. Pain?
If not for you my life would be in vain.


anamika said...

its very nice poem
actually it is describing the success of strong aspirations over pain


Sunil Aggarwal said...

Dear Laalli
It is total surprise. First poem and that too well written. Good, good, keep it up.

mohit mittal said...

Dear Pankaj
You have really taken me by surprise. Really the poem is well composed and well edited. It speaks volumes about your mental state through just few lines. Good. Keep it up.
Keep writing...

Umesh Bawa said...

Tough contest with pain. Let pain wins the game